Content / Idea: Fear the frog. Because it was a 2 headed frog?? What is this slogan, I do not remember OKing it. I want to see a different one!! Why is it in black and white – justify please. Can go down stairs to print it – This is meant to go in a magazine so what is your intent who is your target market and how are you using the grid. Although you feel like I am the problem I feel you really need to do the research to get an idea of what you want. I try and suggest things to you and you have music on and do not seem to want to put the effort in yourself. If you listen to the comments about others work you will start to understand the principle of 2D design that is why we critique. I do not see this as good design. Come to class and start doing your roughs properly. All you have to do is trace and you can do that. You give up before you even start…. Listen and look at as many different advertisements as you can. Look at the designer and breakdown the grid that they are using. I expect better work from you and am not responsible for you attitude. REDO YOUR ROUGHS AND advertisement. Why is the text in caps? What is the reference to the designer. What grid are you using? Why a frog? Why are you using that particular text?
Content / Idea: Fear the frog. Because it was a 2 headed frog?? What is this slogan, I do not remember OKing it. I want to see a different one!!
ReplyDeleteWhy is it in black and white – justify please. Can go down stairs to print it – This is meant to go in a magazine so what is your intent who is your target market and how are you using the grid. Although you feel like I am the problem I feel you really need to do the research to get an idea of what you want. I try and suggest things to you and you have music on and do not seem to want to put the effort in yourself. If you listen to the comments about others work you will start to understand the principle of 2D design that is why we critique. I do not see this as good design. Come to class and start doing your roughs properly. All you have to do is trace and you can do that. You give up before you even start…. Listen and look at as many different advertisements as you can. Look at the designer and breakdown the grid that they are using. I expect better work from you and am not responsible for you attitude. REDO YOUR ROUGHS AND advertisement. Why is the text in caps? What is the reference to the designer. What grid are you using? Why a frog? Why are you using that particular text?