Tru, what are we going to do to get you motivated. I can't see your roughs. I don;t see your finals. YOu really need to put your effort into this class. What Can I comment on when things are done so hapazzardly
Hey tru. What I would like to see from you is a lot more attention and follow through. You have some very quick ideas and find it problematic to work through your ideas. Your advertisement is not as good as the original. Your big problem is that you are not listening to suggestions and not prepared to work on your Typography. Your type is hanging in the corner and negative space does not work. What is your hierarchy? Every thing has the same weight and there is no movement in the piece. The advertisement does not work, and text illegible
NOTES NAME: tru DESIGNER Alexi GRID: Modular TARGET AUDIENCE CONCEPT: weird with moderation SLOGAN: Disgusting Fear the 2 headed frogs? When you are there you are there. Grotesque. Where is your grid? Where is you logo? Where are you digital roughs?
Tru,
ReplyDeletewhat are we going to do to get you motivated. I can't see your roughs. I don;t see your finals. YOu really need to put your effort into this class. What Can I comment on when things are done so hapazzardly
Hey tru. What I would like to see from you is a lot more attention and follow through. You have some very quick ideas and find it problematic to work through your ideas. Your advertisement is not as good as the original. Your big problem is that you are not listening to suggestions and not prepared to work on your Typography. Your type is hanging in the corner and negative space does not work. What is your hierarchy? Every thing has the same weight and there is no movement in the piece. The advertisement does not work, and text illegible
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ReplyDeleteNAME: tru
DESIGNER Alexi
GRID: Modular
TARGET AUDIENCE
CONCEPT: weird with moderation
SLOGAN: Disgusting
Fear the 2 headed frogs?
When you are there you are there.
Grotesque.
Where is your grid? Where is you logo? Where are you digital roughs?